pleas roger help me with my animation's i do get bad and mad persons
yeah! this was fun!
That was fucking funny! (This is for both parts.)
I have to admit that you are one of the most divisive authors on NG. However, whatever you lack in drawing finesse, you make up for it with humor and sincerity. (The latter is something that's lacking in top-rated submissions these days.) If Flash CS3-5.5 is giving you shit with .swf export; try downgrading to Flash MX, MX 2004, or 8.
When it comes to the animation, it's the same badly-drawn-on-purpose style that many either love or loathe. Of course, I think you ought to study up on basic drawing and animation principles. Trust me, it helps a lot yet this cartoon's authenticity and humor more than make up for that. (I know a site full of drawing and animation resources if you're interested.) The sound--while flawed--still gets the point across. You did a great job on selecting the music, and the actual voice acting was good. Then again, the recording quality was really scratchy and I will also recommend that you either get:
-a better microphone
-a pop filter
Finally, the content of this was fucking hilarious though I never played Kingdom Hearts. I was laughing throughout both parts, and I kind of like that looping music video. On the other hand, putting that loop at the preloader screen rather than the end was a mistake on your behalf. It contributed to that larger filesize, and therefore made loading more tedious. Plus, that montage segment at the end seemed awkward and random. By the way, if you do anymore game spoofs I will suggest that you check out:
-Tales of Phantasia
What I did like:
-Nice music selection
-Good voice acting
What I didn't like:
-That looping dance segment should have been a bonus feature rather than a preloader screen.
-Scratchy sound quality
-The badly-done-on-purpose look is starting to get stale.
-The montage segment at the end seemed random.
Overall: Roger, how would you like a nine from me? (4.5/5)
Actually, This movie is made 20% in Cs3 and 80% in Flash 8. I'm an old fashioned guy.
Badly drawn on purpose? Heh. Sadly, purpose or not, this is how I draw.
I am improving with each movie, but at this moment, this is pretty much my skill set.
The music montage is kind of a tradition now with all my Kingdumb Hearts videos.
Same with the preloader thing.
Tough the good news is that part 3 will barely have either of them, mostly because the main movie is going to be tough by itself.
Thanks for the review.
no bleeding on the royal raceway!
Love the B gata Theme at the end