It carried on a tad to long for the joke it was carrying and the side jokes were a bit hit and miss for me. Art was nice, still showing hints of other animators style but hey you got to learn this stuff somewhere. Animation was limited but it was there were it was needed.
I can see this being awesome for lot of guys, keep up the good work.
You're certainly improving, dude. Your animation frame-by-frame wise looked cleaner in this one, and your voice acting isn't bad, besides the Miyamoto guy.
But that being said, my major complaint is the content. It's just, well, it wasn't all that funny, and I didn't get any jokes (if there were any). Maybe it's because I'm not a video game fanatic, but regardless, I didn't crack a smile. Plus, it's another parody. I mean, it's hit and miss when you make parodies all the time and rely on jokes that only the people who play it get them. I'd like to see you make something original, maybe even a series. It seems like you'd be better at that.
Anyways, not good, but not bad. 3/5
I liked this the animation was mostly smooth and the jokes were funny, the voices were clear and audible and I will tell you this after so many basher comments when I score someone I do it on animations I like or see potential on and I give accordingly to what that animation is trying to convene to the people who watch it. So this is what I do, as for other people I would suggest either leaving constructive criticism or pointers, or just something that comes to mind but if it is just bashing comments from an ignorant mind, remember that you don't have to watch or even review.
horible he knows how to fly and characters should be nicer then that
You gave me 1 star because the characters were mean to each other and because pit couldn't fly?... which he CAN'T...
big fan of you, however didn't find this one as entertaining maybe because of the backgrounds and lack of dialogue. i think you write very funny dialogue and have a good voice for it, either way I like the animation (especially Pit's design) and it's cool that your girlfriend helped you out on it