I really like that you made an entry with a serious tone following your comedic Open Round one. Variation is important, and you are not predictable with your entries. I really enjoyed this one, especially because of how different it was. Very good story structure, too - Well done!
I am watching this and GROWIN' UP. Ok I watched them and personally I think the animation was better in this movie but GROWIN' UP's art was better. But GROWIN' UP's animation was bad it was mostly just tweening I think you could have won if you didn't use that static sound so much it is kind of hard on the ears :/
Yeah, maybe I should of made the static a little softer sounding. GROWIN' UP beat me by a solid 10 points though, It probably would of took a lot more for me to score a win.
Thanks for the comment!
You are one of the few artists that didn't took the motto "Elephant in the room" figuratively but literally. As far as I see it you delivered a creative flashmovie with your very own style, I especially like the work with the color.
Not only the black/white for death and bright colors for the living, you even had an eye for details (the protagonist is blue, his wife red, so their daughter is - purple!)
Sound fits perfect, thoughtful storyline with a consequent end (you said you had to "cut a lot", but I didn't notice any plotholes or continuity errors) - great work!
Don't be too sad that you didn't reach the next round, there were a lot of good submission in NATA this year, keep it going, you sure got the talent for more success next time :)
Thanks! Hopefully I'll get better by the time NATA 2013 comes around.
This is great man, I loved every minute of it. Very nice work on this!
Thank you! :D
3.24 is a really low score for something like this.I really enjoyed! keep making animations :)
Thanks! Well if enough people like it I guess it'll go up. c: