This is pretty good. I thought is was kinda funny. There's not a whole lot I can say, but if you plan on making this into a series, it may help to chroniclize this series by numbers. Other than that, good luck.
Not a bad flash. Some of the bits were funny.
Some technical glitches (the radio's mouth keeps moving after its done talking")
Is there going to be a part 2? Because the ending doesn't have much to do with the beginning.