I love Dwarf Fortress...Slicing open a minotaurs guts then slapping him to death with hyena meat.....
this was really good. it's a shame Dwarf Fortress dosn't get the attention it deserves.
the drawing was fine, and the animation moved smoothly. i think these spelling errors are just you trying to express an accent in text format. my only complaint is that the text seemed to change too quickly at certain parts. i couldn't take in the images and read everything at the same time. but this was fine for your first animation.
now i must ask, after seeing this superior *animation*, do you plan on making anything else for newgrounds in the future.
Sorry for the late reply, I thought this flash had collapsed into the newgrounds caverns by this stage :) Thank you for the reply, I believe you are right about the text panning out too quickly, and I will be certain to take this into account for any future possible animation entries, although I do not plan to be creating any new animations sometime soon. I have since the release of this animation been preoccupied with taking up drawing seriously (a passion I've had since as far as I can remember, although never really taken all that seriously), which is mostly why I've been lack regarding new contributions. I do plan on uploading new content in the future, although most of it will probably be to fill out my art gallery.
You're dead on about it being a shame that not enough people play =*Dwarf Fortress*=, it really is a marvel. Hopefully in the coming future it'll get the recognition it deserves. ;)
that wasnt too bad but i suggest u work on your line art before you add color. a little more detail would of made it better. in my opinion that was great for a one month project.
keep up the good work and pay more attention to detail and shading
Thank you very much for the comment. I appreciate your criticism, and I agree I could have added more detail to some of the scenes. I will try to develop my drawing skills as best I can. Thank you once again.
Really good! Nice story and good drawing, I like the style.
Even the music fits good
Thank you for the response, I'm glad you liked the music, Tarn Adams is a wonderful composer. I'm also glad that you liked my drawings. :-)
Fantastic Music. +
Good Story. +
Great Animation. +
I realy like the Style. +
Start Button. +
Restart Button. +
Some decent sound effects like Torch burning etc. Would be great. -
Very good. If it's true that you made this in a Week you'll get the 5 Stars. Look that you get a longer animation up!
Thank you for the response and telling me what you liked/disliked about it. I'm glad to see that you enjoyed it, and I'm happy to take your criticism into account. :-)