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Boy's Revenge

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I think this turned out pretty decently, considering it's my first Flash movie and my first time animating stick figures.


***Update: I completely forgot to tell you guys to press space to advance text ^FT^" Sorry.

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Very good beo!
~Chris

Can't say I like it. Mostly because I have to right click and press forward or play to have them to speak. And sadly thats a real deal breaker on any flash movie. Though there are some slight issues I have with the movement of the characters, good job overall. Its entertaining to say the least (up until they start to talk, than i gotta right click through that.)

Should probaby add a button to advance the diaglogue when they're speaking. Otherwise not bad for a first move, and thanks for sharing!

Beocro responds:

I'm so sorry. I forgot to tell you guys; Press Space to advance text.

You did a good job on the animations but you could have tested it out and tried to make it so that the conversation text goes on by itself and not that i have to right click and then press play or forward.Thats 3.5 for you ;)

Beocro responds:

I'm so sorry. I forgot to tell you guys; Press Space to advance text.

That was very good! especially for your first one. The music was great, the animation was good, the only downfall was the ending. It was too sudden and not really summing it up at the end. Also, you might want to add that you have to press the spacebar to go through the talking so people aren't getting mad and think it's broken. Overall, good job!

Rating: 4.5/5

Beocro responds:

Thanks! I think so far you're the only one who's figured out to press space :P. And thanks for the tip, I'll try to rethink my endings. ^^

Good for first, although maybe it would be wiser to practice more until you're a pro. It's two stars 'cause...
(1) It was quite short and-
(2) It wasn't the BEST animation.
But, on the other hand, I liked it! It definitely had a better result than my first (actually I should start animating some more myself)!
GREAT JOB!!!
~Thelads1~

Beocro responds:

Yeah, I know it was short, I made it in two days. And about it not being the best, like I said, this is my very first time animating stick figures.

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Votes
8
Score
2.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 7, 2012
12:59 PM EDT
Genre
Action