Awesome. I like the story, music was fine, I have nothing to say about that, a half of a star is missing, because I don't like this kind of drawing.
"how the fuck am i sapost to get to the nearest desert??"
I liked it. I think you should make it into a series. The whole "ssssssir" thing was pretty cleaver.
lol very well done! maybe u should make it into a series about the creeper!