That elephant fucking owned!!!!!
kinda slow paced, should be a little quicker, I feel the slowness from the convos cuts the storyline.
the ending was ok
Your art confuses me.
In places you show a brilliant aptitude for shading and mood depth. In others there is no shading at all and looks empty. If the art was consistantly at it highest quality all the way through it'd been at least another 0.5 on your score.
Story was daft but amiable - zany in it's own right.
Sound. That' an issue. Voicing was ok but need to speak clearer into the mic. It SOUNDS like you need a better mic and probable better audio cutting software - wheres also a loose peice of audio somewhere in the video that sounds like a cat coughing. Take more time with your audio.
The video was awkwardly floating along but your story was conveyed - your art was your best card.
Because I made the entire thing in 20 days
That was not funny. good animation though! could have been funnier. This review is probably going to get deleted because there is no freedom of speech on this dictator website but hey, at least I got to input my opinion once.