makes me think of ASDFmovie
Author Comments
it's finally here!
this is my first REAL project I've properly worked on, so I wanted it to be a good one.
I made this over the course of a week, and I had a lot of fun making it.
lip synchronizing is SOOOO BORING.
thanks go out to all the people who gave me helpful criticism and motivation while this was being produced
Credits go to hylianensemble and Kingdaro for music.
Also credits to my friend Zak for the "up" sketch because he got pissed off at me when he saw this and realized that I stole his joke.
Quite liked this one, you've got a good sense of humor!
The voice acting for Baldie is great, nice timing and well delivered.
The animation is also quite good, movement is fluid and while the lip syncing sometimes doesn't match the syllable it's well animated to the dialogue and believable.
I suppose the biggest downfall is the simple drawings which aren't quite stylish enough to warrant the primarily black and white colour pallet.
That being said, i really liked it and can't wait to see you improve.
5 for you!
GoKritz responds:
most ego-satisfying review so far, thank you :3
It was okay. Nice
Love the Yugioh reference there were a few points where it was a little out (like Baldie's arm was in his head at one point and the writing on the DuckHQ sign was cut off) but all in all pretty good.
GoKritz responds:
Thats not my fault, the original swf works fine on my PC but for some reason NG decided it would be better with a taller resolution :(
You're voice acting was fair, but I'd reccomend not using the shape tool for everything, and trying for a more original concept. I'm sorry, but I can't stand to see another "sketch-after-sketch with a static transistion" flash. I think you did a swell job with the procedure you chose, but I can't fifen.
GoKritz responds:
Non-original concept for a non-original writer.
Im a terrible writer. Thats why I went for comedy sketch - its easy.
Im gonna be working on something that isnt Baldie next time though - I'll take what you said into account
