A little too heavy on the scatchy film effects.
The music was cool.The pace was perfect. It definatly does'nt need anymore color. Maybe it needs to be a tad more lighter.
A note on your preloader: You should start that annoying heart beat when your movie is done loading, and fade it out as your music fades in.
All in all I enjoyed this.
I liked it a lot!
I thought the black and white was cool, but the story reminded me of Blade.
can't wait for part 2.
Thanks for the great review. If I may comment in regard to the Blade thing, that is a common point. I actually copyrighted the story prior to the Blade movie (the Blade comic was MUCH different). The two ideas (Shroud and Blade) are very different in tone and plot, although there are similarities (as with most things). I like to think of Dr. Shroud as a collective parody of all horror heroes, Blade included. Thanks again, though, for the very nice review and I hope you keep watching.. :)
Needs color, more action, and more sound but other than that it was great.
That was pretty good