Not bad for an introduction, I wouldn't call it anything that lets me go waw but hey for the series it's a nice introduction. You might have considered making it as the first submission for the series though xD
I wish this was a real game!
*sigh* Kinda sad this game doesn't exist in real life. I wish we had virtual reality like this. Now i'm depressed. we probably won't get anything like this for a LOOOOOONG time.
On the positive side though. This pretty much shows how well you've set up the story. The story in episode 1,2, and 3 pretty much explained most of this through the storyline. Although this was a bit helpful in explaining stuff. Seeing it this way makes a lot more sense than just the way the episodes explained it.
Creative, well thought out, and as usual, a treat for the mind. Awesome job Kirb.