The controls are simple and easy to pick-up. I am not going to say I have better, because I probably haven't. I am just going to actually review this as a gamer. The levels are not very well thought out. Maybe next time you plan on making a platformer game, draw out each level. The character... it needs some work to say the least. You should make a game with placeholders and get a nice artist here on newgrounds that needs a start to help you out! The functionality is nice. The menu needs more work, it is too plain. You should probably add some more levels. Play your game and debug, Debug, DEBUG!! before releasing. I am sorry if I came offensive or lengthy this is how I enjoy people to write reviews for me. ;D