I love the way you used one persons story to tell a bigger one. This helps to give a visual about the dominant culture or style that suppresses others. Or what can happen to people when they give themselves up to the pursuit or pleasure over all else. Beautiful short, one of my favorites.
Amazing....a whole world, a story, Its such a masterpiece, very dark, but a masterpiece still. worth well more than 5 stars
This was amazing and a great outlook on modern society. Great Work!
This is definitely one of the greater flashes I have seen on this site. I thank you for that.
This isn't a movie, it's a prophecy. This already happens, but they use money, debt and labor to rob you of your vitality. Those who would stand on the backs of others are only limited by the fact that technology is not yet at this point. When it is discovered, they will drain people directly of their vitality. I believe that stem-cells are the building block, as it has already been shown that stem-cells can regenerate foreign tissues.