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BUT STILL Amazing Story and Animation Cheers ;D
What a very dramatic story here. I watched your flash movie at least 5 times. It's nice to see something different, that someone is willing to deal with human emotions like fear, and lust. You weren't afraid to portray this in your flash and it was very moving. That makes it unique to other flashes.The fact that it was in another language added on to my imagination that it was in the future. The animation was superb, however it was a bit choppy at times, like at the beginning of it. The man moved a tad bit too fast, static. Maybe a bit more dialogue to explain some questions, Why are the "White" Robots superior?What made them that way? Is the white city surrounded by the ugly ghettos of the workers one big establishment or is it a living thriving city for the "White's"? Wouldn't someone who had been transformed have told everyone of the horrors of the lab when they "win"? Or are they controlled? And why do the "Whites" have an immense sex drive? Those are just some of my questions. I may have more, but I can't remember. I would like to see some more of your work, but just add a few explanations here and there. A little more dialogue wouldn't hurt. Over all, I would show it to a friend, however at first they would probably not fully understand the message. But in short, your flash was Very good. Would the Morale of the story involve having the main character changing on the inside, revealing that all he wanted was already inside him, or something along the lines? If it is, that's a good message. Cheers to you! ^_^
Powerful and moving stuff sir, the beautiful animation combined with clever and challenging ideas makes this a hit. Loved it :D
absolutely amazing story line :D
The animation was beautiful, gorgeous music, wonderful story telling, robust vision of a dystopian future and a moving message delivered within. I loved it!