Audio just ruined it all, Animation needs some serious work, sound effects were okay, but voice audio files must have been recorded incorrectly, they sound like you recorded them standing 4ft away from your mic with a metronome going to help you keep time, but really all it does is make your audience's ear drums bleed. Please fix.
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a parody of the kite runner.
Dragoncone responds:
this was for a school project so I really did not try to put my best effort into it agian thanks for the tip