I made this in 3 days (with pauses and everything, I'm not very fast), and i had to repeat constantly the frames because they had some size problems and other stuff. I know I must improve, if someone wants to advice, please, do it.
excellent start! placing the right noises and music with the right moments indicate-already- that you're on your way to success. i don't want to sound like some kind of hero to you but i really liked your starter. i sucked way more than you when i was first posting on here and i'm glad others aren't similarly as bad. making it longer would be cool and try using more colour.
suggestions!
It was funny. Keep practicing your drawing and stuff.
Keep it up!
3 days to make a poorly looking 30 sec. animation is a bit long, no ?
Animation and graphics aside, you can barely tell what your character is saying. He sounds like a bukkake victim trying to mumble something through his cum covered mouth...
And the "foreveralone" meme does not fit here very well. Try to avoid using memes at all. Most people are just sick of seeing them and they'll weigh down your flash level.
I laughed at the punch line. I would have had some colour in there though, and I think you should have added some background picture to the preloader, and a background pic to the movie as well. Other than that it was a good first movie. Keep going! :D
