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This is a chronicle of that one time when I shrunk down and lived in my dollhouse.
More is coming.
if you like, see more of my work here www.youtube.com/ beccajhyman
thanks newgrounds for allowing video formats now. awesome.
My, this was very good in my eyes. It had that creepy feel that you just didn't know what was coming and that string that just pulls you in to know more and more of what's going on. The narration isn't original (as in narrating in a movie/film/short) but i still very much liked your narration. I'm am definitely going to watch more of your shorts. Good job!
awesome, glad you liked it enough to want to see more! there are some shorts on my channel www.youtube.com/ beccajhyman if you're interested. your feedback was helpful; it's good to know what's working for people (atmospheric-wise) and what's not, even if it's on a personal level. so thanks!
it was a really well thought lil story but the animation needs help.
I has question, the doll house, did you like zoomed in on everything inside the doll house or what?
I enjoyed it, looking forward to the next ones. Animation was a bit shaky, but still quite acceptable. I liked the stockings too :D
ha thanks, in england we say tights
Good story, bad animation.
Advertised to be scary, in a way, it was, but also funny in a Ironic way (note: I just watched the Exorcist (1973), first time, not a skipped beat, shiver, or chill)
you could have made the whole thing animation, save the clash from happening.
giving you a 4.2
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