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Edit : 5th and frontpage ;D Woah thankies!!

At last after 25 harsh days my submission for NATA 2012 open round is complete!
The theme is : Discovering time travel
I'm very excited for it.
I hope you'll like it.

Criticism welcome! I want to improve!

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AL3K suggested good idea. Maybe you make other flash 'bout the black dude. That should be awesome :D


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Well I think the characters were pretty well done, but the black dude was like overly stupid... I would've make him more violent and offensive, like when he fails.
Also.. I didn't understand what the black god said, but maybe that's just me...
Everything else was perfect, I liked the details added, although you could've add some funny things in the background too... loved the song at the end, pretty cool


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DuDuL responds:

"Bitch please that ain't me"
Thanks for the review ;3 - i'd add more tasty snacks to this but i've ran out of time - 25 day limit is pretty tough :D


What was the song in the credits? Nice plot


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DuDuL responds:

"Funkorama" by Kevin MacLeod
Peace


Where am i? Poland?

Racist.

hahah :D Overall very good



That was awesome! havent had a good laugh in a while.


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Score
4.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 9, 2012
3:20 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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