This should not be categorized as a game. Even the 'maze game' portion doesn't work. It's a simple mouseover of a destination, with no effort on anyone's part.
this is not even a game. it is a story you just click through. the english is terrible and the font colors are very difficult to see and annoying.
The art of fiction needs a heavy amount of inspiration, you have it. Loved the bright colors and i see that you put in a lot of effort, all things considered maybe it's not your opus magnum, yet it is enough to get a B+ at least. I'd recommend that you spend some time on the continuity of music through metagame and also you must work on the speed of intro parts. 'Nuff said. Good work and I'll make an exception for your creative soul. Keep up the spirit!