This can evolve into something. I see some talent.
Author Comments
I'm trying to improve my animation, so I'd love some reviews!
This was animated in 2 days while I was taking breaks from studying for finals. I did the voices and the ukulele thing and the animation and whatever. I don't know anymore. I'm tired. I might go take a nap.
It's short and sweet, like most of my animations. I think I'm going to spend more time on the next one and give it a plot or something. I hear people dig plot nowadays in these crazy times of ours.
I really liked this for reasons I'm not quite sure I understand. The voice acting and facial animations were really good; but everything else seemed kind of static. Short, but that wasn't really a problem cause I can just replay it repeatedly for the next four hours or so....any tize...
fuck wuz that?
It's way too empty and I don't think that I need to say any more than that.
Work on art, own backgrounds, movement, but most of all make something bigger than this with a larger point.
Good luck in the future endauvers.
The animation is perfect.
When working on a plot be a good writer, it has to actually be great for people to like it.
What would be even better is to just improve your jokes, this one didn't make me laugh but I'm looking forward to see new and improved work from you.
