ahahahahahha, if the drawings were better, omg this would have been sooo perfect
The joke is comical genius, but the animation was pretty weak. I like it.
For a newer creator that was pretty good
Not bad, made me chuckle.
Mmh the funny-ness is missing, it's too serious. The idea on which the flash is based is brilliant, but you need to animate in a totaly different style, allowing expressions etc. Only then will it rock as a joke and be worth a 5.
If you don't know what I'm envisioning then just leave this flash alone for 6 months and then rewatch it, you'll see what I meant then.