Good god you have to speed read lol. Good flick though
This is one of the best animations I've seen here in Newgrounds. Though, what would make this animation even better is if you could give the characters voices and more SFX because if you have to read subtitles to know what's going on then it can get pretty dull. Also if you could put Rewind, Fast-forward, Pause and Play buttons in the flash then it would be better to watch. Keep up the good work and consider my recommendations.
I enjoyed the concept of the animation, I enjoyed it but when I went to your website, google chrome stopped me and alerted me to the presense of malware on your website.
great job! cant wait for more!