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Dragon Ball Multiverse 1

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May 2, 2012 | 4:00 PM EDT

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EDIT: 'wow! thank you guys for Daily 3 and tom for frontpage. i was not expecting that ^^"

you can browse between Universes in the preloader menu by clicking the "Next Uni" button

WARNING: this flash is nothing awesome or epic! so dont expect much..but i guess this enough to sadisfite DBM fans who really wants to watch the manga animated.

also! i might only continue this if i got enough support. you know..like likes or positive feedback..you know the drill...

so..tell me what you think about this. im open for every critic. negative and positive .but please i want a real ciritc. wich point out what i did wrong. and not like only saying it sucks without any point.

anyway thats it for now.
DBM is owned by Salagir and Gogeta JR
DBZ is owned by funimation fuji tv. toei animation and akira toriyama

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bocodamondo

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DeEnilol8erDeEnilol8er

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very well animated, sounds are on cueand good as always.
2 problems,
I think you should find some voice actors ( like ME! :D)
and DON'T USE COMIC SANS.
Other than that, 5 stars!


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Failure118Failure118

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I must hand it to you recreating this from comic form to animated form is by far one of the best things I've seen so far very nice job and a very large 5 stars for you :)


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FarhzeugFarhzeug

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I've never seen anything quite like this on newgrounds, and i've been here for years.

I WOULD have give you 4.5 stars, because the ''auras'', voice acting and mouth syncronization could use a little work, but I realized (as a Dragonball fan) that you have made something that by far surpasses alot of online stuff.

As mentioned below me, contacting voice actors (and probably som aura designers) would be a really great idea.

Just do me one favor, don't give up on this, I want to see more stuff like this from you, but do take the needed time, it's better to have a great result after a long time, than to have some bad results with less waiting.

oh, and I also gave you 5/5, I WOULD do ''over 9000'' but that doesn't seem possible, and could take me years.

As for what exactly you should work on:

Auras:
i noticed the different aruas, they did look like they should, but they seemed to move around a bit ''laggy'' they need to be more smooth, but they are alright as they are if you want to keep them this way.

Mouth syncronization:
It clearly eksplains itself, the mouths don't seem to be completely syncronized with the words, This can be easily seen when looking at words, and noticing how the mouths are placed.
as an exmaple, you can't say ''O'' with your lips tied to an ''M''

Voice acting:
Just get some better voice actors, and it's great, nothing else to say, but I still can take it if you leave it be.

Animations:
Though the animations were great, they of course could be more smooth, work only a little more on that, and they'll be as smooth as the series themselves.

''drawing'' :
This is really great, I could recognize every single person, of course there are a few things that make them look a little different, but it's actually not worth caring about.

Have a good day, and keep up this great work, i'll be waiting with patience until the next part


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DomitjenDomitjen

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Amazing, been waiting a long time for something like this!

Keep it up mate!

The art is a bit degraded then how it's shown in the manga, but that's understandable ofcourse. I bet you have put alot of work into this!

You should contact Teamfourstar to have them voice act for you, together you could create an unique, never done before project!

Greetz


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bocodamondo responds:

thanks ^^
yep of course. gogeta jr, the actual artist of DBM is much better then me :3
..well i allready pm'ed Lanipator in YT if he might help me...but OFCOURSE he didn reply...and im pretty sure he WONT replie. i cant rely on those guys...


BalkarzarBalkarzar

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Animation is passable.
I like the whole premise, but I feel their should have been more explanation about the multiverse thing you make it sound like all universes follow same path with minor differences, but things like cell beating gohan isn't something that is a minor difference cause it would impact the universe in a major way. Maybe I am misunderstanding.
One nit pick is Broly, he doesn't use beams, check his moves.
Voices would be nice.
Some sound effects I feel are way too louder than the background sounds.
Ability to pause and/or go back to main menu would be excellent.
An official starting would be cool(with option to skip) and main menu/title screen
But I think its really good attempt at a series.
Definitely potential for a successful series.

PS: Please showcase as many dbz characters as possible, i'm not saying you have to but ultimate gohan, future trunks, and a gogeta v vegito fight would be awesome.

PSS: are you counting gt?

PSSS: remember character abilities and powers, if you decide to change something about them a character information thing would be cool to see how they differ from the dbz universe we know, what i am getting at is if u decide to change something about a character make sure it is purposeful and viewers know about it, one way to do this is character info screen in main menu.


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bocodamondo responds:

ACTUARLY! it is minor . its exactly the same! the only difference is VEGETA didn distract cell. remember if he vegeta didn attacked cell. he would have blasted gohan out. the same also for Bojack as he was hugging Gohan to death. if goku didn instant transmission to punch him. gohan would have died. thats Broly's signature Beam attack. and i think its the only one he got.
well i think sound effects HAVE to be louder then background music....or not?

well ^^ its not up to me to show characters . since im not the creator of this manga show. i just animated this. but dont worry future trunks DID has his shining moment in manga...and im pretty sure soon a fight between Gogeta & Vegeto will come. and its going to be awesome!

as i said im not the maker of the manga. however the writter "salagir" says he ignores GT events! all of them! so i guess there wont be any SSJ4

there are a couple of OCS in this show, but beside that all characters are exactly like in the show with the same ablilities

thanks for the review ^^