This has some effort and potential, but needs work.

the Sound is OK and the music is good.
The animation is limited and uninspiring but does the job.
The plot etc is simple but quite thoughtful. Is there a connection between the intro story and the rest of it? The artwork with those building looks good though slightly fuzzy, then its just matchstick men, which is a disappointment.

What really bugged me is that the text is so hard to read. Most came up dark with the dark man in front of it. I tried 3 times to read it, finally reading most of it, including the spelling mistake.

Not a bad idea. I like the message that the video delivers, however...
The animation was morbid at best. And the fact that there is no voice acting makes the video worst still.
The message is a good idea, but I suggest adding voice acting, remastering the audio for the video itself, and better animation, other than that, not to bad.
2/5
4/10