Wow this made me laugh. The art was really shoddy and the characters shouldn't move around the screen like that (but you traced it so maybe it's accurate). I recommend coloring in the characters rather than leaving them white, looks lazy. Also practice using the brush tool, lines don't look good. It's good to practice drawing over movie clips if you want to get better at art, I guess.
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This is a scene that I myself reenacted from one of my favorite films from the 80's, The Adventures of Buckaroo Banzai Across the 8th Dimension. I made a stroryboard, then I acted out the stroryboard. After that, I uploaded the video file to Toon Boom Studio, and traced over EVERY SINGLE FRAME. Then I colored them, and added my own audio. The actual clips themselves can be found here:
All in all, I am kind of happy with how it turned out. Sorry for the loop. I can't find a preloader anywhere. I'll find one next time.
spacezoomer responds:
Wow, thanks for the tip. I'll remember that.