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Apr 29, 2012 | 3:58 AM EDT

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This is a project we've been working on for a while now. This was one rough ride for a first cartoon, but from all the effort we gained valuable experience that will ensure that our future projects will have top-notch quality and better reflect our much improved skills. Special thanks to everyone involved and everyone who's supported our ideas.

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Very well done for your first flash. There's room for improvement across the board though. The animation was decent and the content was funny, but the audio needs some work. There were quiet spots that really could have used some sound effects or music. The villian monologue was particularly sloppy compared to the rest of the flash. Some of the voices could've had better timing as well; there were too many pauses between sentences. Overall: funny, well put together, and impressive. I know its been quite a while since this was submitted, so I hope you all kept at it and perhaps I'll find more of your work in the future.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

what just happened?


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

UM EGORAPTOR MUCH! jk it was funny tho


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Hmm well there's a couple things I liked about it but a lot of things I particularly didn't.

First off, I like how the animation is smooth. I like the backgrounds, they look very traditionally-drawn and they're interesting. The colors you used were basic, but they popped out nicely and weren't in any way dull.

For what I didn't like, everything sort of went very out-of-proportion when the characters moved around. Obviously the style is very simple and needs work, however it doesn't look like it's SUPPOSED to look fantastic or anything, so it's not really an issue. But everything is just very messy and odd. Sometimes it looks like other characters are in a completely different spectrum compared to others in the same shot.

Voice acting wasn't so hot either, either practice mroe on that or get some actors. Some voices were better than others, though.

As far as plot and storytelling goes, there wasn't really a whole lot there, and I know it's supposed to be kinda random, but it was just very repetitive and unfunny to me. Overall, the whole thing wasn't horrible, but let's just say I was kinda glad when it was over.

Just practice some more and I'm pretty sure you'll make something pretty hilarious in the future.

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Leathertoast responds:

We appreciate constructive criticisms such as this rather than pure bad reviews with no explanation. We can promise you that all of our work will be much improved from this point on, as we went through the entire process of making a cartoon backwards; we had nameless characters, monologues, and many areas that needed improvement. Our future work will hold memorable and developed characters, as well as stories and dialogue that will set up the humor, and animation that will not be half-assed in any way. Thanks for the suggestions and keep an eye out for our next projects... they won't disappoint.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

only funny part with the epiclepys part in the beginning