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rated 3.17 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Apr 28, 2012 | 1:25 AM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my first animation that I've uploaded on the internet.
Learned a lot from making this.
Any sort of feedback is appreciated.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

To say this is your first... You're gonna go somewhere!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This was a pretty good first attempt. You established a good sense of style and personality quite early on, which a lot of artist here on NG take a few animatons to acomplish.

The humor was in there, but at times, it felt like more of the same. The same being what artist here on NG have already posted.

Hope to see some more of your stuff on here in the future. If i had to say what to work on, id'd say background colours, and tweening. The drawn backgrounds we're a tad dull at times. And your strong point is defiantly your frame by frame. Try using less and less tweening, and you'll have some really sharp animation to show off.

Cleptar responds:

I'll definitely aim to improve, thank you for the constructive criticism!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Normally first animations are pieces of shit that deserve to be blammed, but this was actually pretty damn good. It was a lot like Oney which could be considered a bad thing since it seems like you might have just copied him, but I did enjoy the commentary on his work as a whole while also making fun of how the flashes that are popular on the website.

Additionally, your art and voices are pretty good, but they could stand some improvement in quality. I'm sure that you'll improve as time goes on, though.

So, yeah, I thought it was awesome. Can't wait to see your second flash!

Cleptar responds:

Glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for the 5 stars.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

this was awesome on so many levels.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Wow, that's your first? You're good. The animation is smooth, including the talking. You gotz plenty of sound and music at good places throughout. I could've seen this from a seasoned pro.

So, do you always look and dress like Steve from Blues Clues? Don't worry: I have that problem too.

Cleptar responds:

Looking and dressing like Steve is basically a curse of mine.
It's good to know I'm not alone.
Thanks for the feedback!