This is good for a start, go and find sound effects, and try to prepare your voice for 'Voice Acting', then it will increase the quality of your animation.
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This is just my first movie submission so no harsh reviws please.
ssibi responds:
Thanks I thought of voice acting but i don't have much friends to do it and me too have sore throat so I wasn't able to.
Well, it's OK if it was your first animation....
ssibi responds:
Thanks
This is not even close to new grounds standards man. Good luck with your animation though.
ssibi responds:
Ok I'll try better next time
good concept and I'll let the crap animation slide because you asked me to but I had to press play 3 times to watch the movie, which sucked.
The flash wasn't well-thought out or humorous. The animation was very sub-par. Much of the animation wasn't animated at all. This could have very easily been made in MS Paint as a collection of drawings. The artist states he is inexperienced, so it's understandable. Just needs to refine his skill.
ssibi responds:
Yes thanks and i'm working on that