This IS a flash movie.
Look here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /593515
If something like that is posted in the movie department, with different features for selecting scenes etc., then I guess yours will fit in there just as well. It's nothing more then a movie that allows you to adapt it to your reading speed, basically. It's not very interactive besides that.
The movie itself is.. meh. Well, okay, you're beginner, and it isn't all that bad. You surely put some effort in it and thought about it, which is good. Keep on practicing!
AWW<3 thank you! ^v^ okay i'll put the final part in the movie portal, thanx 4 the advice~
its just boring....
i know... i am a newbie after all ;)
If its not a game, why is it in the game portal??
then where shoul i post it? because i cannot post it in the movie portal either T^T
it's not my problem if there isn't an "interactive portal" here :\