I just did not find it that funny and the faces did not help
Sorry but this didnâEUTMt tickle my funny bone.
Not bad, but there could be tons of improvements. Few notes: First, the drawing. The drawings were very awkwardly proportioned and inconsistent from each frame to the next. The characters shrunk in size and looked different each time you changed a pose. Additionally, the line shake effect was heavily used, which didn't really help the weak drawings.
Also, the light source and shading was off. The characters shades were on opposite sides each other, which makes no sense for the light. Also, in some cuts, the direction of the light source changed. There was no real sense of where exactly the characters were.
Anyway, hopefully those critiques will help. Good luck in the future.