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This took me quite a while.
I initially TRIED to steer away from the silly faces, but I enjoy doing them and they keep me entertained. That was one piece of advice Edd gave me before he passed away.
Draw funny faces to keep yourself from getting bored.

Anyway, here is an original short by me. This time, not really a parody.

Feedback is appreciated ^_^


I just did not find it that funny and the faces did not help

Sorry but this didnâEUTMt tickle my funny bone.

Not bad, but there could be tons of improvements. Few notes: First, the drawing. The drawings were very awkwardly proportioned and inconsistent from each frame to the next. The characters shrunk in size and looked different each time you changed a pose. Additionally, the line shake effect was heavily used, which didn't really help the weak drawings.

Also, the light source and shading was off. The characters shades were on opposite sides each other, which makes no sense for the light. Also, in some cuts, the direction of the light source changed. There was no real sense of where exactly the characters were.

Anyway, hopefully those critiques will help. Good luck in the future.

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4.10 / 5.00

Apr 18, 2012
11:51 PM EDT
Comedy - Original