Well, knowing the IQ of the author, I must applaud the effort. However, in comparison to even a mediocre artist, this was awful. But please, don't let such criticism stop you from making more posts, because I would love to continue viewing to see a young artist grow in not only his work, but as a human being :).
Well; I'm going to give you the truth. The mouth movements weren't good. The background was weird and didn't function good. I barely understood a word of what they were saying; and technically the quality made me technically not care. I do think you should think of a better plot for any of your videos and practice more.
Your honesty is a respected virtue. I am new with flash, as you can see. I will learn and grow with helpful criticism as so.