As my girlfriend always complains "far too short" (just kidding! (i don't have a girlfriend...)). But the art is nice and music was nice and the animation was nice and it was well timed and well executed and interesting and smooth. You had a preloader which is required for easy viewing and replaying the animation was a simple affair. So my only advice is try making something a little longer. I also reccomend trying something original, there are far too many parodies and references on NG for my liking, and you have a nice style that carries itself (unlike some people...). Good luck with future stuff!
well it was definetly short but not a waist. this is fine work here!