Haha dont get me wrong this was very funny and a good flick of a submission if you ask me great art and you pulled off the joke well, but In my opinion this could be better with either more content or other short clips along with this short one, just an idea to think about.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice film here, But I should comment that the things that are of a small concern would be that they are too short and they could use some extras a few more atleast and that would give the whole flash entry more depth, so adding a few more episodes per flash entry would be a good effort on your part. anyways nice effort.
This is pretty old, dude. And it was a birthday gift from DomFera.. back then, short videos seemed to be fine. It's 2016 now :)
The improvement was already achieved. But since my stuff isn't short anymore. It's taking me a lot of time to finish a long animation, that's for sure.
But again.. it wasn't an episode. Just a short animation gift. But I thank you for the critique. :)
This was a nice movie. Happy Birthday Dom. Enjoy your presents and have a great day.
I will have to check out more of your work.
Well i'm now starting.. I'm trying something big.