Well, it was an ad. Your music was pretty interesting. It kind of sounds like Math rock to my ears. I think you would really dig a band called Breadwinner. You should really check them out. They aren't very well known..But they rule!
This is supposed to be a review..
It wasn't that entertaining, the text was chopped off on most parts so you had to guess what you were talking about...but I don't know...Eveything that I was going to say the previous reviewer already said...Just read it twice. hah.
I thought that one of your "logos" (or whatever its called) was really awesome. It was The one that had your name, in grey, and then small text saying "A slight dose of coma" all over the place behind it. You should use that one.