Wow! I found this presentation to be both beautiful and touching. For one's first submission to Newgrounds, this is fabulous! Excellent work on the animation and a great level of detail.
Just one minor note: I would suggest you have the audio fade out near the end of this animation rather than have it abruptly end. That is my only recommendation.
At any rate, superb work and I look forward to future submissions of yours if you have anything else in the works.
Thank you for the encouraging feedback and the suggestion about the music, I need to work on a lot but audio stuff is at the top of the list :) I hope to have more to submit, this seems like a good place to get opinions and hone skills.
words are not enough to describe the beauty and passion that has truely filled this
Its beautiful. You clearly have something going on here. My advice is to keep on animating, get experience, and come back to this piece at some point, you know, to smooth it over. Add some more detail, etc. Best of luck.
This is filled with your original artwork. A modest ausio track. Overall I find it to be very good, and very well done. Also I'm glad you cited the music, something too many people don't do. I know if you keep working you'll improve your animations to higher levels and make grand videos.
Very beautiful and heart touching. Only thing it could have used was a little background story and it would have been a 5/5. Make more you're very talented and practice is progress.