Choppy animation, crappy sound, short length, terrible effect.
It's just not that good. I advise adding plot, extending animation length, and getting some better sound effects as your first steps.
Author Comments
This is the second animation of red pirates. For all the people who give their comments in our first video, thank you very much. As a animator I learn many thing from your comments. Maybe in my second animation there is an improvement. Still, just continue give your comments, because your comments helps us alot.
redpirates69 responds:
can u give me some tutorial about the plotting and can u give me some website where i can get nice sound effects??
not bad, could make it longer