Nice .swf, I liked the drawings and music. The story of touching Grimace's thick ass was compelling. 10/10
Author Comments
It's Steven's birthday, so Frank decides to celebrate with some McNuggies.
So, I'm aware this is your first attempt, and it's always neat to see someone learning. Might have been funnier if there was more to it - Grimace's reaction to having his ass grabbed, perhaps? Zooms and tweens are only scratching the surface of what you can do with a Flash. I suggest trying some frame-by-frame animation; it takes a lot longer but you can get nice effects with a combination of the two. You'll probably want to spend more time on your next one and make it longer. Anyway, keep practicing your drawing and animation; you've got potential!
redrik009 responds:
Thanks for some constructive criticism! This is the best review I've gotten so far. I'm coming up with a follow-up video with some voices and animated characters, and I'm learning frame-by-frame right now. I appreciate the positive comments, and I'll keep learning and practicing!
optimus prime
Completely non-sensical, lazy and, quite frankly, liquid retardation.
I think I lost IQ points watching this.
redrik009 responds:
Good.
Good job for your fist time
redrik009 responds:
Thanks!