I didn't like it at first because of the silence, sound would be nice but it grew on me. The movie as a whole was long enough to get me interested and not so long as to bore me.
If I may make a suggestion, some of the frames were really out of focus, and I know you said your camera is crappy, but it may help to find an angle that is in focus and do most of the film from that position.
Not that you SHOULD do an entire film from a single location but the position of your camera relative to where your filming.
Trust me, this one and the next one are the last one's that are out of focus. Parts 9 and 10 are actually clear (10 even more so...), plus they have voices. Thank you for the feedback.
I see you have followed my suggestion to use a more memorable logo.
This was pretty decent and i have no complaints. while it wasn't great, there wasn't anything that stood out as bad.
so i will now respond to your response to my review!
>the whole transition thing was supposed to be a majoras mask kinda tribute, not sure if it turned out like that or not...
nope, just abruptly cut transition music.
>I guess I was trying to set up a reoccurring gag, that no one seems to care about Rick's death
understood. though in this series, with the history of poor writing and huge inconsistencies for the first few episodes, its hard to tell if it's just poor writing or a comedic gag.
>I guess a record scratch could have worked there, but there were to many problems with this one as it was, no sense in going and finding sounds for it
so what you're saying is that if it's already crap you'd might as well let it stay as crap instead of fixing it?
>The scene that followed, I don't really know what it was for, just to change the mood I guess, and again reference to Wills attitude, and feelings for Jenny
backstory is usually revealed in a more subtle way and since you considered it "inappropriate" at the time, wasn't there an alternative? i'm going to assume people who look up videos of Legos are probably fairly young
Well, I'm glad this episode seemed alright to you. Not sure what you're going to think of the next one..
I guess you can't really trust anything that's supposed to be a plot device or a gag, since nothing was written down.
Going back to the topic of fixing things, I actually tried to fix a problem with part 8 but yeah, that didn't turn out to well. Sometimes fixing the problem causes more problems, so it's not really worth it in the long run. I will be fixing the problems with part 9, so I don't get any hate for there not being background music in it.
Again, I guess sometimes I'm just to lazy to do stuff.
Not sure what you're going to think of episode 8 (especially with its problems) but again I promise 9 and 10 will be better. These two are the last of the crap episodes.
Thank you for the feedback, and I can't wait to see what you think of 9 and 10 tomorrow.