I see you have followed my suggestion to use a more memorable logo.
This was pretty decent and i have no complaints. while it wasn't great, there wasn't anything that stood out as bad.
so i will now respond to your response to my review!
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>the whole transition thing was supposed to be a majoras mask kinda tribute, not sure if it turned out like that or not...
nope, just abruptly cut transition music.
>I guess I was trying to set up a reoccurring gag, that no one seems to care about Rick's death
understood. though in this series, with the history of poor writing and huge inconsistencies for the first few episodes, its hard to tell if it's just poor writing or a comedic gag.
>I guess a record scratch could have worked there, but there were to many problems with this one as it was, no sense in going and finding sounds for it
so what you're saying is that if it's already crap you'd might as well let it stay as crap instead of fixing it?
>The scene that followed, I don't really know what it was for, just to change the mood I guess, and again reference to Wills attitude, and feelings for Jenny
backstory is usually revealed in a more subtle way and since you considered it "inappropriate" at the time, wasn't there an alternative? i'm going to assume people who look up videos of Legos are probably fairly young