its ok i like the story but you need to take more pics to make movement move fluent and take better picture.
LEGO Land Ep. 6
EDIT 2/2/17: Since I've released this series combined into one video along with a new soundtrack, I've gone and updated the NG versions of these with the new soundtrack and whatever other differences there are between the original uploads and the new versions. This was mostly for the removal of copyrighted audio, which has been a controversial thing on Newgrounds lately, but there were also a few timing issues originally, and I've added clearer subtitles to the first part. While it is nice to have a much more fitting soundtrack and to be able to see this in wide screen and just slightly better overall, this does mean that there's really no way to see the original versions of this series anymore, as they were originally removed from youtube for copyrighted music, and now the same has happened on Newgrounds. It's not like it was relying on the music though, it was just there to be there, so no harm has come from this. If anything, I think the new soundtrack IMPROVES this. That's not really for me to judge though. Why am I even typing this? It's not like anyone even cares about this series or is even gonna find it.
Also, since I Just rendered off the individual parts from the master file for all of them as a single video, this means that the original credits have also been removed. That's not really much of a problem though, 'cause who wants to sit through that, right? Part 10 still has credits though, but that's 'cause it's the credits for the whole thing, and the end just kinda works better with credits, I think.
Also also I've gone and replaced those shitty short descriptions with better ones that actually tease the events of the episode. Again though, not like anyone cares.
MUSIC CREDITS
Dub Feral Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/
I Know (instrumental) by Now It's Art https://nowitsart.bandcamp.com/
ORIGINAL DESCRIPTION:
Note: As indicated by that... annoying thing in the bottom right corner... this was originally made in 2009, and the quality isn't that good. Quality gets better as episodes progress, and the quality of episodes 9 and 10 are almost perfect, so bear with this and hopefully those ones can be up soon, just have to get the older ones out of the way first. Anyway, I hope you try to enjoy it, even if it is lacking in quality.
DESCRIPTION: Will and the gang are vacationing in Lego Falls, and strange things happen. Meanwhile, Rick begins his search for Lego bricks to build Gods machine.
This one took a while to get up because flash kept having de-sync issues, but I fixed them. I was going to add some visual elements, but yeah, I'm lazy and it was taking to much time, (also more recently, I noticed I had messed up with something on the title screen...) I did put a little flare in the logo on the title screen though...
This one feels kinda short to me (probably because it seems like there's going to be more of a plot, but it doesn't happen) but yeah, nothing I can do about that. That's what happens when you don't write a script, and just go with it.
Parts 7 and 8 are encoded and I will upload them tomorrow around 5ish so look for them then, they will be a lot better (they're a two parter, so no waiting for that cliff hanger, lol) and then 9 and 10 will be up on monday, again a 2 parter, but those ones are more worth it since they are the last ones of "chapter one" and the last ones that I actually made...
Well enjoy, and look for future episodes.
Also, not sure if it will be rated appropriately (content wise) someone tell me if my final decision should be changed or not...
>God does what he wants
why he'd ever think he'd need a teleporter is beyond me. alright, now onto the review:
In the beginning, with the acoustic guitar music during one of those default Windows Movie Maker screens - you really killed the pace by abruptly ending the song. If you let it continue and edit everything together, it would have come out better. Or maybe it'd just become one of those horrible unfitting songs, so I could always be wrong in this department.
Those 3 lines at the beginning felt very unnatural. A man having a conversation with Rick's brother, and his brother talking about how he's dead. Then he just says "see ya." That killed any tension you were going for in that scene. If you were TRYING to comedically crash the pace, a record scratch sound effect would be best suited there.
the scene after that was just plain random. it did nothing to contribute to the plot or to be funny. it just creates a very odd, random atmosphere.
alright so this felt like a poorly scripted filler episode
2/5
artistunknown responds:
Yeah, this one wasn't that good in my opinion either. When I was looking for music for those transition moments, I coulding really find anything good, so I just went with whatever "soft" sounding thing I could find, the whole transition thing was supposed to be a majoras mask kinda tribute, not sure if it turned out like that or not...
I guess I was trying to set up a reoccurring gag, that no one seems to care about Rick's death, remember back to whichever episode it was where he died, and then they play chess afterwards seemingly forgetting. I guess a record scratch could have worked there, but there were to many problems with this one as it was, no sense in going and finding sounds for it. I might try to put more effort into the next ones before publishing.
The scene that followed, I don't really know what it was for, just to change the mood I guess, and again reference to Wills attitude, and feelings for Jenny, yeah it really didn't add, but again, not really anything I can do at this point.
Yeah, this episode really was filler, wasn't it? It didn't really add to it or anything, well , Ricks plot did...
The next few episodes will be a lot better, that I can promise you.
