Box Adventures - "DEMO"

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LINK: http://yohangames.com/

Fix 19:08 PM GMT (Game Loading Glitch Fixed Agin (Hate this Glitch!))

A Easy/Hard Game for everyone! No Gore or nothing!
This was a Quick Demo for my Game so Please don't Blame it!

I Wanna Show a Quick Demo how the Game Should Look Like!

- Yohan

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This was a basic story but it was a calming game. This game could be better if there were people you could kill. That is really the only complaint.

i broke the game

It could be better.

TheeCoffee responds:

I know :P

A good start so far, but obviously needs some work. The music is awesome, and fits the levels very well. The story seems to be pretty basic, but since you said below that you'd have one in the full version, that's not a problem. As a demo, it's fine, but some suggestions for when you produce the full version:
-Don't have my health bar follow me around, maybe put it on the top or bottom of the screen. It tends to get kinda distracting.
-Work on the physics. The jump doesn't always work, so sometimes when I want to jump up and over to another platform, I just fall sideways. Steps sometimes bounce me off, back down a few steps. A couple of times I fell through the floor into lava. Once, I bounced right off an enemy without taking damage. Some of the door buttons don't work the first time.
-Some of the level blocks (platforms, walls, etc.) don't line up properly, while it doesn't affect the gameplay, it takes away from the overall "look" of the game.
Keep working, this has the potential to be a great game.

TheeCoffee responds:

Thanks! For your Review KickChick! I know that the Game needs some work but the Sideways Glitch isn't Like a Glitch. It has to be so. Or else the "HitTest" Thingy will glitch up so you fall down everytime. I am very sorry about that. I am 13 Years old so i am Pretty new at this (I've been makin games after i was 9 Years old.). I know that there is a Problem with the Jump. But i can't do more to it :(. I Reduced the Health bar so it's more tiny. (Not Distracting anymore). Thanks for your Review! :DD

It has lots of bugs, but I think this definitely has potential if you manage to flatten those out.

TheeCoffee responds:

I've Flatten it out on The FULL GAME :DD

Credits & Info

3.77 / 5.00

Mar 31, 2012
1:59 PM EDT
Action - Platformer - Puzzle