wtf????????????? it was in "games"
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READ BEFORE YOU WRITE A COMMENT
THE ENGLISH IN THIS COMIC IS NOT VERY PROFFESIONAL THAT IS IT MIGHT NOT BE PROPER IN FEW PLACES
PLEASE DO NOT SEND ANY ABUSE REGARDING IT AND IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT NO ONE IS STOPING YOU FROM NOT READING IT
AND ALSO IF YOU GOT ANY PROBLEM IN NEXT AND PREVIOUS BUTTON THEN TRY RELOADING IT
SCREEN WILL BE BLANK WHILE LOADING...
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Robot Astron
A story about a robot and a group of contractors
who find that that robot is not just a fighter robot but also a person from their past
how can that be?
what is going on?
what's that robot exactly?
well you don't have to wait for long part 2 which is coming soon..
but first let me take a break..
*phew* i didn't know that making such a basic comic can be so stressful o_____o
well i am a beginner i guess that's why...
ADreamyHead responds:
well..the title says "comic" and since it's not a movie i cannot send it in movie portal
and so it's in right place an adventure and point and click so it's YOU who made an ass outta yourself..
so SHUT THE F*** UP!!!!!!!!! >:( IT"S A COMIC YOU **** ***
It's not a game, and the story is bad.
ADreamyHead responds:
woa there it's not even the full story and you've already judged the it?!LOL
It isn't really even a game, but it's not too bad, but it could use some music.
Spelling/Grammar Errors
ADreamyHead responds:
and what i said in THE DESCRIPTION?! READ before you WRITE!
It was all right and had a decent pace. What I suggest is perhaps voice overs or if you cannot get that, try putting some music in your comics. Like light music. Not elevator music, but light, soft calm music. I should also add (I'm aware this is put in the area about the video) that you get someone who is at a higher skill level writing wise to check over your writing. That should improve it a bit more.
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