Not bad... But you still have lot's of work to do.
Great idea, poor execution.
The graphics aren't the best, but I see what they were aiming for here.
The game lasted a little too short, and it didn't look too professional, so I just don't think
this is really good Newgrounds material- But hey, maybe with a few adjustments with graphics
and score and overall gaming appeal, this might just be an awesome game! :D Keep trying!
Good setting, however, there are some things to work on.
#1: It's too short. Maybe add levels or just longer and harder modes.
#2: Graphics. They need to be better. A start cutscene could help.
#3: Boring. Some power-ups , abilities, tricks etc would definitely help.
All in all, a good game but not front page material yet.