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Hey, everyone!

This took me about a week, maybe a little longer. It's pretty short, but I really like how it came out.

I'd love some feedback on how to improve! Thanks :)

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kinda obvious u put little effort in this, no music besides bad whistling, short flash with no meaning, its tired obviously, and wasnt funny. Try being more creative and use more energy.



I agree with Spazkid but...

My main problem here is the style.
It's just a copy n' paste of...Oney and Pebble. And it suck because it didn't look personnal, it's just look like forced humor and shit. Also the voicework was kinda low, I mean you can't really do a funny voice voice, more annoying than funny.

Because yeah, adding a crappy music and making stupid sound with you mouth doesn't make it funny. Maybe if you had a little more of your humor and not "SpazOneyPebbleRaptor" humour it would be funnier.



Is this really what passes for humor now? Well I guess I shouldn't be surprised. Most of the people on this site are mentally retarded anyway so it would make sense that this is the kind of video that gets rated up.



The Jenny part was good, but it really went down hill from there.


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Views
166,750
Votes
5,407
Score
3.79 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 19, 2012
1:53 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Parody
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