WHAT THE HECK IS THAT!
Dafuq was that?
i dont know why everyones complaining i loved it =D
how to improve? depends on whether you're going to continue making short funny ones like this.
Cos' the obvious answer you're inviting here is 'longer'. Also I see you went for disgusting/weird/pathetic looking characters for comedic impact, but if you started with decent designs which rapidly degenerate into something much less so, that would draw more attention to their character design.