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Practice Game Trailer

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I am currently on a games development course and this is a first attempt at an animation im doing at college, can I get some constructive feedback.

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Hello dear fellow college student.

While taking my own personal criticism i have learnt, through the aid of others, that we shouldn't be doing flash animations at all!
In all seriousness, the animations i think are a bit... Jumpy? With it being final fantasy based, as you've personally told me yet totally forgotten to tell the audience, i also think there should be something a bit more.. experimental? I don't know, either way im still just as bad. Lol

I like your hero and his animations the most, even though its only his eyes that move... Improve that and i will love you... Passi... Yeah ';)

Im torn here...
On one hand (compared to the other trailers that are being judged right now) this is what a trailer is supposed to be like
on the other
DEAR GOD MAN, WHERE DID YOU LEARN TO ANIMATE??
lol okay, its not that bad, but seriously its subpar
Keep trying!
its the only way you will get better

boultinator93 responds:

Haha ok mate, cheers I i'll take your advice and i'll improve my work.

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1,471
Votes
2
Score
1.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 19, 2012
1:18 PM EDT
Genre
Action