Horrible, no sign of fluent animation or effort, a jaggy background when the character changes poses, and why the hell is that blue Tails there?

What?

I'll give you some credit I see you're actually trying to make a point here but I still fail to see what that is.

Not bad for a first flash, huh? Here's my thoughts:

1) I'm a little surprised that a bleeped out curse word could still make an E rating. I would've made it T. But that's neither you nor me. You probably could've done fine without it.

2) The sound needs a lot of work. Maybe see if you can get yourself something noise-cancelling, and there's lots of tips out there on how to improve your sound.

3) Your characters seemed a little random. Blue Tails? What are you doing here?

4) Finally, what on earth is that ad doing there? That's distracted me quite a bit my first time watching. If you had to have that ad, please post it afterward, although I honestly don't see why you want it on your flash at all.

Good luck to you and your future submissions.

Different. Very different Cameron.

LOL VEEMON GOT OWNED