Pretty good, some goofs, but other than that, good!
Author Comments
Alright, some of you may have seen this before. This is a special edition of what you've seen before, with animation touch-ups, higher sound quality, and commentary! This was worked on over a span of MONTHS, and this is one of the best submissions I've ever made to date.
I hope you enjoy this one! Reviews are appreciated!
People complaining about images and calling stuff lazy with no helpful advice, blah blah worthless reviews. People, do you Honestly care if a walk cycle has frames or not? NO! That kind of Tech stuff isn't gonna make this Movie communicate better what it is trying to communicate. I found this interesting to watch, it doesn't have to make me laugh to entertain me. Sometime a slice of quirky life is interesting in it's own right. I like the pacing and how we go to different scenes. As long as I can see a gag and it isn't indecent, it's good. Stuff to be careful of is things getting missed cause they happen too fast, NEVER be ashamed to slow down animation, even if you have very few frames. Like the words on the wall being hard or on the magazine being too read (although I really don't care about words much), I'm too busy enjoying the tip toe animation or noticing that it says PALY BOY on the book. AlsoThe Water splash in the face happened too fast, it might have been seen better with a hold on that splash graphic longer than a couple frames or add an impact splash Graphic. Good work.
MistyE responds:
Thank you very much for your review! For episode 39, I will make sure that the animation has better timing.
Thanks again!
It wasn't very well written. I didn't laugh one time. The backgrounds and scenes were lazy and some of them were just stolen images. The animation was choppy and sloppy. The voice acting was very poor and had no feeling.
Usually I would say this is fine for a beginner's animation, but since there hasn't been any improvement since your first contribution to the site. Maybe spend some more time on the art and writing a better concept. I honestly don't know how your score got as high as it did.
Keep working hard and I'm sure you'll improve in no time.
MistyE responds:
Stolen images? The Fred poster and the fireplace are the only props in this entire animation that wasn't drawn in Flash. The animation is something I'll work on, and the voicing cast has been replaced.
I personally think this is a great improvement since Adrellia Village #1, but I can guarantee that episode 39 will see some improvements. I'll spend more time on the animation, and regarding the writing, this is only the start of a fairly long series.
Thank you for your review, your advice will be taken into consideration for the next episode.
It was alright, it wasn't awful, but nothing too special either. I like your frame-by-frame animation you use at times, but everything else seems to be rather lazy. Writing's fine, but voice acting was quite dull.
The whole concept and such seems okay to me, but I think you just need to breathe in a lot more life into the execution...
MistyE responds:
Thank you very much for your review! For episode 39, I'll definitely work on the animation so it doesn't look lazy, and I have an entirely new voicing cast. I appreciate your take for this.
This reminds me of some animation called -Abraham-