Hmmm, It seems that Pnny's are the easiest flash animation to make. Story line was too dragged out and how someone below me has said, I feel, a bit more animation should be in order. It couldn't how my attention but I blame that on my ADD, lol. I am not going to give you a biased (even though I have mine) just because it's MLP. MLP's an alright show that actually teaches good virtues what it also seems to me is that some are trying so hard to have MLP relate to other parts of life, say make it more masculine. I don't know just something I've noticed, but it all fit to gather well, besides all that, and quite honestly you're well on your way! One of the principals of salesmanship is to please the masses. You've at least got a target audience.