You should have lip synced this and added more than just close ups with funny faces. It's less like an animated short and more like a slideshow or PowerPoint presentation.
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Crappy Animation: Me
God Awful Voice Acting: Me
FreddyDoesntCare responds:
Thats what im workin' on bud!
Ha! Ha! ha! ha!
really cool.
really like your style of art.